Kael Romar - Jedi Master/Councilor

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Kael Romar - Jedi Master/Councilor

Post  corenth on Sat Jul 16, 2011 10:19 pm

Name: Kael Romar
Nickname: Soul of Light
Alias: N/A
Home world: corellia

Looks

Age: 35
Gender: male
Species: human

Eyes color: green
Hair color: Dark brown
Facial features: N/A
Skin tone: tan

Height: 6ft 5in.
Weight: 225lbs
Build: decently muscular

Tattoos: N/A
Body art: N/A
Scars: N/A
Piercings: N/A

Appearance: dark robes over silver armor

Personal Details

Personality: can be very wise at times, patient, his attitude is more relaxed, does not allow himself to be worried. can be stressed over work plenty, then again who isn't.

Force Sensitive: yes

Alliance: Republic/jedi
Guild/Group: Jedi Order
Rank: Jedi Grand Master

Strengths: The force, knowledge, staff saber skills
Weakness/Flaws: stress, worry over the safety of the student

Other Information: Languages: basic, ryl, mando'a, shyriiwook translation, ke'ldor

History:

Born on corellia, Kael was a gift to his parents. He grew up in an average family. His father was a farmer, while his mother was a stay-at home type. When Kael was 5 years old, he showed his first sign of force sensitivity, he somehow pulled a cup, that was across the table from where he sat, into his hand. Kael learned from his father about patience, hard-work, honor, and much more. Kael went to school like normal, learning kel'dor language aswell as basic, to be able to talk to the kel'dorians and other species. After school, his father made him exercise to build up muscle. He exercised every day for 2 years.

BEING FOUND AND BEGINNING OF NEW LIFE

Several days after Kael's 7th birthday, a stranger to Corellia was exploring the planet, searching for young force sensitives. The stranger found Kael, playing with his friends outside his own house. Kael called out to his father who came out to meet the stranger. The man introduced himself as a jedi who was in a hurry. He talked with his parents about Kael's sensitivity to the force, and they agreed to let him take him. The sith were hot on the jedi’s trail, but they were too late. The jedi ran to his own ship quickly and transported Kael to the jedi order. Kael was admitted into the order after being tested to see if he was ready. Several councilors believed him to be to old, but the vote was decided. Kael began his training the next day. He payed attention in his classes, using the teachings of his father. Kael's focus became sharper day by day, and he grew more skilled in the force. His lightsaber training was adequate enough for an initiate.

3 years passed and Kael was in sparring class, facing against a padawan. kael had difficulty defending himself, the padawan was hammering him hard, obviously more saber focused. But after 15 minutes, he began to see the pattern of the attacks and caught sight of the flaws. When another chance came, Kael took the opening and force pushed the padawan into a wall, winning the spar. A knight by the name of Sharen was impressed by the initiates capability. While Kael was meditating, Sharen came in and talked with him, and after an hour, offered Kael the position of a padawan under his guidance. Kael happily took it.

THE PADAWAN AND HIS LOSS

Years had passed, and Kael was now a well trained apprentice. His knowledge of the force grew as he learned more and more force abilities. His knowledge of the core powers was superb, and he was now capable of taking on a knight in a spar. Kael was now 22 years old, and he felt better than he had in years. More focused, more attuned to the force, and more obedient to the ways of the force. His master put him through the knight trials. Spirit, courage, and skill, and he passed every one of them. There was but one last trial to complete before he could be allowed to take up knighthood, trial of flesh. But with good tidings came bad. He and his master were sent out on a mission to naboo, to find the so-called 'terrorists' that were causing havoc around Kaadara. While on their assignment, they were attacked by pirates and gangs. It was clear now that these people were the cause of the chaos. Kael and his master fought side by side, defeating their attackers and protecting each other. But There was a flaw. An opening through Kael's defenses allowed a pirate to penetrate and stab Sharen. Kael turned seeing this and sliced off the hand of the pirate, pushing him away. He tried to get his master to safety but Sharen commanded him to run and leave him behind, giving him his lightsaber. Not wanting to disobey Kael followed orders and ran. Sharen never survived.

KNIGHTING AND BEYOND

Kael returned to the temple, carrying his master's lightsaber. The High Council called Kael in. After much deliberation, Kael was ordered to kneel as the council ignited their blades. They acknowledged that he had completed his trial of flesh with the death of his master, and from his courageous effort to defend against the pirates, he was therefore made jedi….knight of the order. Kael stood, accepting his new position. He immediately took on assignments such as teaching classes about force abilities, jedi ethics, etc. And as the years went by, Kael had managed to take up an apprentice of his own.

His first padawan was one student named Vara Kushina. He trained her exactly as Sharen trained him. He pushes her harder than ever, but it seemed like everything he threw at her, she went above and beyond expectations. By the time Kael was 29 years old, his padawan had successfully become a knight along side him. But, through the time spent, kael grew attached to vara, forging a bond greater than than of the master and apprentice bond. He was in love with her. Kael had taught several classes and trained many initiates. And from this the council made a decision. Kael was once more called to the council chamber. It was there Aaron was permitted to take up the position of a jedi master for his many years of faithful and dedicated service. They began to discuss with him about a secret base that was nearing completion on a system in the mid-rim. This base was going to be used as a shelter for the jedi when they need it. Because of Kael's deep loyalty he was the only jedi master that wasn't on the council to be entrusted with this secret. Kael vowed to keep this secret.

LOSING A PADAWAN AND NEW LIFE

Several years had passed and Kael had his second padawan called *static* with him. This one showed to be his second most promising and greatest student yet. The council had given them a routine diplomatic mission to Corellia to help settle a dispute. The dispute was between the territories of two well known houses. The Madgi and the Floric. The arguement was over their family lands on Corellia. Kael saw through the issue and was able to defuse it and bring an agreement to the table. Both houses signed the agreement and shook hands, but it was a fraud. The Floric's own guards burst through the windows and opened fire on the Madgi. Kael and his padawan ignited their blades and defended but it was too late, the Madgi representative(the father of the family), was murdered by the Floric rep.

Kael ordered his apprentice to disarm the opposing guards while he got behind the murderer and slapped cuffs on him. While the padawan was busy dealing with the guards, one turned and shot him in the back repeatedly when he was bringing his lightsaber down to cut a gun in half. Aaron saw his padawan fall and the remaining Floric guards were pinned to the wall with the force. Hours passed and the Floric house and guard were arrested for treason and murder. Kael returned to the temple with a full report on what happened. After much deliberation, the council agreed that Kael had shown wisdom in his actions. Wisdom worthy of a councilor. Through a vote of the council, kael was granted the position of a councilor.

Items: comlink, datapad, staff lightsaber(green), few thousand credits

Force Powers:

Neutral Powers
Jump: 3
Push: 3
Pull: 3
Speed: 3
Sense: 3

Light Side Powers
Absorb: 2
Heal: 3
Protect: 2
Mind Trick: 2

Saber Skill: Saber (Blade) Attack: 3
Saber (Blade) Defend: 3
Saber (Blade) Throw: 1

text powers
Doppleganger(learned during his Master rank) http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dopplegänger
Farseeing(allows user to see into future or even of happenings elsewhere in the galaxy)
force deflection(self explanitory)
combustion(Causes an object to explode)

Weapons: staff lightsaber

Ship: Jedi Advanced mark 5 starfighter


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Re: Kael Romar - Jedi Master/Councilor

Post  Firewolf on Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:31 am

Ok after some time of looking over your history it looks pretty well but please now the jedi are in a near extinxt state so some are in hidding with a small group of jedi aside from that on to your text powers.... and what you should fix about them

force grip(levitating an object or person, not a lethal power) - After looking over wookieepedia's description I found Force Grip and this is indeed a lethal power it levitates people off the ground choking them (Hence the grip used in it) however if your looking for a power to levitate some one you could just put "Force Levitation" instead (heres the artical on Force grip for more information it was an advanced dark side power of force choke - http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Telekinesis#Choking_powers)

storm judgement(lightside version of force storm, advanced lightning power, green color instead of blue)- Please now the name is Electric Judgement not force judgement, and this is not like force storm instead and it has a reason for glowing powers like green or blue "This power was uncommon and controversial among the Jedi because of its intrinsic association with anger and aggression." because of this it also makes it a power the Jedi would not use at this time because of the darkside use of it during this time the council would not now of this power until the clone years were Plo Koon experiments and trains to controll this power. For short this power cannot be used at this time.

Doppleganger(learned during his Master rank) http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dopplegänger - Ok this is a good legit power no problems here

Farseeing(allows user to see into future or even of happenings elsewhere in the galaxy) - Now on to this very powerfull power this power is Called "Farsight" not farseeing (I now thats my mistake but I looked that up on Wookieepedia) aside from that this would take awhile to learn but from your bio this is possible of your character to have this power

force deflection(self explanitory) - Ah yes Force deflection this is a power mainly used of the jedi so I will approve of this use as well

combustion(Causes an object to explode) - And lastly Combustion or otherwise also reffered to as Flamusfracta. Im a little edgy about this power being used by a jedi but it is possible.... your jedi may use it on not alive objects only if he fails to do so by killing some on that is alive it would put him in a state of exile.

Now moving on to your force stats
Force Powers:

Neutral Powers
Jump: 3
Push: 2
Pull: 2
Speed: 2
Sense: 3

Light Side Powers
Absorb: 2
Heal: 3
Protect: 2
Mind Trick: 2

Saber Skill: Saber (Blade) Attack: 3
Saber (Blade) Defend: 2
Saber (Blade) Throw: 2

well i approve of this but anyui already made a force stat area for what your stat should be so please reffer to that. (Heres the address to the Set stat area we have http://rpgcata.forumotion.com/t3-stat-rules-for-force-users-using-jedi-ranks-applies-for-sith-ranks however if you want to keep the stats the way they are thats fine to)

All I have said I hope will be corrected soon if done so I will approve of this bio

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Re: Kael Romar - Jedi Master/Councilor

Post  Admin on Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:47 pm

And also, there is no saber throw included in the stats. But, since there isn't a rule against it, you may have it. Soon as you fix the powers, you will receive the local retard seal of approval.

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